good+narrative+examples

These are narratives done by other students in Year 4 (not at our school). You will see the notes on the side that explain what the writer has done in their text. Take a look at the link that says "Where to Next" and see if you agree with what they suggest for that writer to work on next time.


 * [|The Moment I Scored My First Try]


 * [|The Big Wave]


 * [|The Dove]


 * [|Brussel Sprouts]